POEM TIME!!

So, i have said before that i would post some poetry...
and here;s the first poem!!!!!!!!!!
Hope you like it...

It's called Ocean Day...

The sun,
It smiles down on me,
Glad that I’m here.
The salty breeze blows,
Wrapping me up
In a blanket of cool.
The gulls,
They caw at me,
Saying hello,
Asking how I’ve been
The sand tickles my toes.
An attempt to make me laugh,
Which works.
The tide rushes over my feet,
Then pulls away,
Beckoning me closer.
Im here
At the ocean
With all my friends.
No people,
But that’s okay.\


So, tell me what you think through comments!!

-xx Nikki